OMG! Thanks so much for your extremely detailed critique. It is so valuable and I’ll definitely be going over it (several times, I’d say) to add in all those emotional flavors you so rightly suggest. Thank you again for all the kind words that came through along with the suggestions.
2. Great stuff! Just the sort of thing that I wanted.
3. Thanks Dan!! That was so helpful!!
4. Thank you so much, Dan, for the crit. It was excellent… It has been amazing to get a crit like this. Thank you once again and I look forward to the next Word Weavers.
5. Thank you so much for taking the time to look at and read my story. Your kindness and consideration is amazing. We need more authors like you! ❤
6. I can’t thank you enough for your suggestions. It…
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